A Change of Paths

With moving house and a hectic schedule at work I’ve not posted much here recently and posting will remain infrequent for a while. However a change in my writing plans means I feel I have to.

Choices is on hold. I’ve got around a quarter of the way through, but I think I need to work on something else for a while to improve my writing.

I know I could deliver Choices  to a standard matching Oranje, and probably a step further forward, with where I am now with my skills. But to do so I think wouldn’t teach me much. The weak areas of my writing – the characters and description – won’t improve by working with the same setting or cast of characters.

So I’ve been working on a new idea. It’s set in the same universe as the September series, just a century or two further forward. I’ve done more work with this idea on having the characters more clearly defined first so that I can work their personalities into the story better, as well as focusing more on how I do description and the pacing of the story.

Hopefully this work and this new idea will help take my writing to the next level. Choices has not been abandoned, I will return and finish it and the rest of the September series. I just need to work on my skill as a writer first so when I do come back it is the best it can be.

Flash Fiction – Found in Space

This story was written to be part of a paid flash fiction anthology a few months ago. That’s no longer happening. Instead there’s going to be a free one that this will go out in, so I’m posting it here as well. Hope you enjoy.

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The red dot glowed on the monitor.

“Are you sure?”

Chima turned to look at his twin brother, Sai, who was standing with his arms folded and one quizzical eyebrow raised.

Chima rolled his eyes. “The scanner doesn’t lie. There’s someone alive in that wreck.”

Sai peered out the window. “Well, whoever they are, they’re lucky they survived whatever happened.”

Their salvage craft floated alongside the exploded guts of a dead cargo vessel. The vessel had broken up into a dozen parts, the metal frame scattering out for ten thousand kilometres. They were focused on the largest bit that was still intact, inside which there was a single live human.

“What do you think happened?” asked Chima.

Sai shrugged his shoulders as his eyes surveyed the wreckage. “Reactor failure or something like that, does it matter?” He tapped his fingers against the window before turning to his brother. “Are you sure no one was reported alive?”

Chima tapped at his monitor. “All the company said was that something’d gone wrong and they needed someone to clear it up.” He leaned back with his hands resting on his head. “Nothing about survivors.”

“Double check, okay? Let’s get them on-board.” Sai winked at Chima. “This could be our lucky day.”

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Hanne tried to block the flashing light with her arm. She was hunched over and naked, breathing hard. They’d put her in the airlock, said it was for decontamination. All she knew was she’d put her clothes into a drawer in the wall and then there were all these lights bombarding her. The walls were a metallic grey, and both doors were secure enough to keep her where she was.

She cleared her throat and spoke to the room. “Not that I’m ungrateful for you rescuing me and all, but when can I get my stuff back?”

A crackly voice came over the speakers. “We’ve run them through decon. They’ll be in your room once you’ve been cleared, as well.”

“How much longer will that take?” The flashing seemed to be speeding up.

“Only a few more minutes. Don’t worry, you’re safe here.”

Those “few minutes” seemed to drag on for a lot longer than that to her. It was a big relief when the interior door opened with a hiss of steam and a thud of moving gears. Trying to cover herself the best she could, she stepped into the ship. Her eyes took a moment to adjust to the darker lighting, but soon the shape of her two saviours came into focus.

Two tall men were looking at her—Chima and Sai, they’d said they were called—each completely identical. Both were smiling at her, and one of them held out a towel which she hastily wrapped herself in.

“Sorry that took so long. Had to make sure everything was alright,” he said. “I’m Sai, this is Chima.”

“Hey, don’t worry, I know you need to do it.” Hanne managed a smile. “It was just a bit too similar to where I’d been trapped for, well, I don’t even know how long it’s been.”

“Your craft was reported missing a few weeks ago,” said Chima. “We’re here to salvage what we can. We stumbled across your little life bubble by accident.”

“That was impressive work, surviving that long,” said Sai with a smile as he wrapped his arm around her. “I’m glad you’re safe now, and I’m sure you are as well.”

She nodded. A shiver ran down her spine and she realised how cold she was. “Where are my clothes?”

Sai pointed over his shoulder. “We’ve put them in a room. I’ll take you there now. Chima has stuff to do in the control room anyway.”

The two brothers smiled at each other before Sai guided her along the corridor.

It was no luxury ship they were living on, that was certain. They passed a few doors, none of which were anything flashy.

“This used to be a prison ship,” said Sai. He must’ve noticed what she was looking at. “We got her on the cheap when she was decommissioned. You’ll be safe in your room.”

He pulled open the third door they passed. Inside, it looked like much hadn’t changed from the ship’s previous life, but her clothes were piled neatly on the bed.

Sai waved her into the room. “Take the time to rest if you need it. We’ve got some work to do here before we head back to base. We’ll come and get you when it’s chow time.”

Hanne stepped inside and sat on the bed. She let out a sigh of relief and let her shoulders relax. Sai started to close the door.

“Wait!”

He poked his head through the doorway.

She smiled at him. “Thank you.”

He smiled right back at her. “Hey, it’s our pleasure.”

* * * * *

Chima heard Sai’s boots thumping up the stairs to the control room.

“Is she safe in her room?”

Sai nodded as he ducked beneath a beam. “Door’s locked and I’ve left her alone.” He licked his lips. “Did you check on the report?”

Chima grinned. With a few touches he brought the whole thing up onto the main display. “Well, as it says, ‘There are no survivors, wreck has only material worth now.’ No one knows she’s alive.”

Sai gripped his shoulder. “That means no one’s looking for her. Is everything ready?”

Chima reached under the desk and pulled out a bundle, which he unrolled. Tucked into sleeves was an array of knives to make any serial killer proud.

“You know what, brother? I think we’re going to eat well tonight.”

Moving Home and Discipline in Writing

Things have been quiet on here recently because of a momentous life occasion. Me and Clare now own our own house!

It’s been a bit stressful (as you can imagine!) but we’re now settling in and starting the process of making the place our own. However it has meant, along with being ridiculously busy at work, that my writing has been pretty much non-existent for the past few weeks.

I’ve managed a few bits and pieces, even outlining a 5 book series I’m going to do after the September series, but nothing on Choices. My priority is to get things settled down so I can get back into a rhythm with it. I find it easiest to write when I write every single day, and when I break the chain it’s difficult to get started again.

Discipline is important as a writer to make sure you do the simple task that is key to that title. Writing. You do that every day it becomes habit and the words flow more and more easily each time. You get lax, or slack off for a bit, and progress goes backwards.

Time to get on with it and get Choices done.

All Fiction has a Message

So the Hugo Award nominations for this year have been announced, but with a different kind of controversy this time round. Usually it’s about a lack of representation in the awards, or them not reflecting modern sci-fi. This time however it was about the people nominated.

You don’t want to google anything about Vox Day/Theodore Beale. He’s a truly despicable person, and incredibly racist/sexist/homophobic.

All of this has been talked about lots elsewhere by far more eloquent people. The latest post by Natalie Luhrs on Radish Reviews links to a lot of those discussions. Instead I want to talk about ‘message fiction’.

Part of this drive by the right wing/complete twat branch of the SFF community to get their own nominated seems to be to get ‘revenge’ for all the supposed ‘message fiction’ that is pushed by the more liberal part of the community. ‘Message fiction’ seems to stand for anything that reflects modern humanity. You know, diverse and fascinating instead of stuck with a 1950’s view of sexism and racism. Apparently people like Vox Day object to this being part of the community and want it to go away.

Well, I’m sorry to say, but all fiction has a message. It’s all ‘message fiction’.

The nut-job part of the community might say that the more liberal SFF books are pushing agenda because of what they say, but so are the works from people like Vox Day. They’re just giving a different, and very unpleasant message.

Every single book has something to say, from the something simple like fun is good, to an allegory on modern socioeconomic circumstances. Pretending that some books don’t does a disservice to the medium.

And I’ll go further than that, I’ll say some books have good messages and others bad ones. Those that promote sexism, racism and homophobia definitely fall into the later camp, and should have no place on the Hugo ballot. I know the awards don’t work like that, but that doesn’t change what I think about it.

Works that promote a view of humanity as it is today, as a diverse and bizarre and beautiful species, deserve to be championed and applauded (if they’re good books of course) for reflecting who we are.

Those that don’t, and try to drag us backwards should be ignored. I understand the desire to keep politics separated from the art, but you can’t with anything created by humans. Who we are filters through to what we make.

Everything we create as humans has a message in it, and I firmly believe there are good messages and bad ones. I know that is controversial to many, but frankly when the SFF community – and hell the geek community at large – is associated with so much sexism and racism, it’s time to exclude those people who peddle messages of hate and division and who don’t reflect what the community is truly like.

So I say people like Vox Day shouldn’t be allowed on the Hugo ballot. Because having him on there is a damning indictment of our community.

On Experimenting, a Breather, and Reviews

I’ve not been posting much here apart from the samples of Oranje recently, and that’s because I’ve been taking a little bit of a breather from the September series.

It’s only been a pause of a few weeks, but releasing Oranje and then diving straight into Choices was beginning to feel like it wasn’t allowing me a chance to look back at the book and learn some of the lessons from it.

This break has also been a nice chance to do some experimental writing. I already have plans for what I want to do once the September series is finished, but what style I do those books in is still up in the air. From what I’ve done so far I think I have a fairly conversation based writing, which has it’s positives and negatives. I’ve been trying out a few ways of writing to help bring out the pros and reduce the cons, such as help the dialog flow more and improve the setting/description.

One of the styles has been a sort of audio/video log, where it’s one person telling the story and then going into more details in scenes. The other is more of a non-fiction history book style, switching between interesting info sections and fly-on-the wall documentary bits. This way certainly draws on a lot of what I’ve read over the years as I’ve devoured a lot of non-fiction military history books.

This is still very much early messing around with some different ways of writing, but I’m pleased with how it’s been going. Both styles offer something, and there are lessons to be learnt that I can work into the writing of Choices to make it better.

I’d also be lying if I said the reviews of Oranje weren’t also a factor in this. On Amazon it’s sitting at a 4 star average, and around 3.3 stars on Goodreads. It’s not setting the world on fire, but no one wants to set it on fire so I’m fairly content with that. If I said I was happy I’d be lying, I want to amaze people with my writing but I’m obviously not at that level yet.

There have been positives in the reviews, but negatives as well. The word potential has been used a lot. I’m hoping this break to experiment a bit more with my writing, and to give me a bit more perspective on Oranje, will help me close the gap between that potential and the reality of my writing.

That’s the plan at least.

Oranje free sample – Chapter Ten – The Final Sample

This is the 11th and final free sample of Oranje, I’ll be posting up to the end of Chapter Ten for free. You can buy it here, or if you’re interested in getting a review copy of the book, you can contact me via email or on twitter (links to both on my website).

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Isi tapped her fingers on the arm of the sofa. Pablo and Magnus sat on the sofa opposite. Pablo looked deep in thought, his eyes closed, and Magnus couldn’t stop fidgeting.

“Have you seen the size of the crowd?” asked Magnus.

“It looked pretty big,” she said.

He stood and paced for a bit before sitting down again.

Pablo opened his eyes. “Everyone wants to see the Three in person; this is a historic occasion.”

“I can’t believe we were approved by such a huge majority. I know Representative Melo said we would, but I still didn’t believe him.”

“Well, you should have.” Melo emerged from behind a wall at the far end of the room. Magnus stood up again briefly before sitting back down, hands impatiently resting on his lap.

“Congratulations to you all; it is well deserved.”

“When will the ceremony begin?” Isi shifted forward in her chair.

“Soon enough, but we have some time to talk beforehand.” Melo sat down in one of the other chairs. “More information has come to light that you need to know about.”

“What is it?” Magnus clasped his hands.

“Thanks to the pseudos, we can finally put a name to the mysterious outsiders: the New Commonwealth of Man.”

“New Commonwealth?” said Pablo.

“Oh fuck,” said Isi, one hand over her face. “They’re trying to recreate the old Commonwealth of Earth.”

“That would be the obvious conclusion to draw from their name, and their actions would certainly fit with that.”

“The Commonwealth collapsed over five centuries ago. Why would they be trying to bring it back?” she asked.

“Because to many, it represents the glorious past of our species, and people like trying to recreate past glories,” said Melo. “It’s difficult for us to grasp as Curators, for we don’t cling to the past as others do, but we must try. Everyone learns about the old commonwealth and a united humanity that disappeared with the Collapse. They hear about the old times characterised by rampant prosperity and technological development. It’s a tempting image for many, and who knows how many people would jump at the chance to try and bring it back.”

“That’s why they’ve been attacking worlds, isn’t it? They want to try and reunite the galaxy, and I bet they won’t let anyone stand in their way.” She shook her head. “Well, that just makes everything a lot worse.”

“How come?” asked Magnus.

“Because people who are motivated by their beliefs tend to be a lot harder to negotiate with,” said Pablo. “If they’re willing to attack planets to achieve their goals, I doubt diplomacy is high on their priority list.”

Isi puffed out her cheeks. The sofa squeaked as Magnus shifted around.

“We still don’t know much about the history of this New Commonwealth, but I wanted to keep you all up to date,” said Melo. “I agree with Isi that it makes your jobs harder. It also makes the mission that much more important.”

“Have the Republic or Union responded to us yet?” she said.

“They have, and the response has been as expected. They’re not willing to listen to us.”

They sat in silence, Magnus’s foot tapping away.

“Then we should focus on who can help us.” Isi rubbed her brow. “I know Magnus and I have started to draft a list of people to visit.”

“We have also compiled a list for you, but there are two standout names on it. General Marienne Kassar of the Union and Governor Violeta Amar of Arausio,” said Melo. “They appear to be best placed to help us.”

She nodded along with the others. “The general was on our list as well. She has the closest military force to Oranje. She could help find out for sure what happened.”

“She’s a good candidate. My only concern with her would be her current standing with her superiors,” he said. “However, I don’t believe we can be picky right now.”

“Our search had been focusing on people who could visit Oranje, so we’ve not read much on Governor Amar,” said Magnus.

“She’s the most influential governor in September and has access to a lot of resources. But much like General Kassar, she is sidelined within her nation, which could make things difficult.”

“There isn’t anything easy about what we are trying to do,” said Pablo. “If they are the best candidates, we should visit them.”

“Take your time to think about it. You don’t have to decide right now. I’ll try and get a few more names for you to consider. There are still a few days to go before you can leave. Oh, that reminds me, Isi.” He smiled at her. “I think you will enjoy this piece of news. The Word is being prepared for your use and has been fitted with some new engines: Draco-500s.”

Her fingers stopped tapping.

The Word?”

“That is correct,” he said.

“You mean the legendary craft of the original Three?”

“That’s the one.”

“You put my engines on it?”

“Well, yours are the best.”

“I, well, I… don’t know what to say to that.”

“That must be a first,” said Magnus, which even got a laugh from her.

“You should leave when The Word is ready, so try and finalise your plans before you go. You will have some time on The Word to plan, but that should be for final preparations, not major changes.”

“I think we can all come to an agreement on what we will do,” said Pablo.

“You can always vote amongst yourselves on what you want to do, but I’d hope you all can agree for now, or else it may not be a good sign of things to come,” said Melo.

“I’m sure we’ll work something out,” she said, smiling at Magnus and Pablo.

Magnus smiled back; Pablo sat still.

Melo craned his neck to get a glimpse out a window. “Looks like everyone is waiting for us. Are you all ready?”

“Yes,” said Isi and Pablo as Magnus nodded his head rapidly, tapping his foot on the floor again.

“Then it’s time for the ceremony of the Three.”

Isi took a deep breath as they rose from their seats and moved to the main exit from the White Elephant. The doors were translucent from the inside, and they could see what looked like a sea of people waiting for them on the grass outside. A stage had been erected beneath the statue of the Three.

“Do you all remember your cue?” said Melo.

They nodded.

“Good. Then I shall begin.” He opened the doors, and a wall of sound hit them before they closed behind him. They had queued at the door, with Isi at the back, but her height gave her a great view of the crowd. It was a bewildering array of colours, with hair and clothes in more styles than she could ever possibly hope to list. Pseudos were in the crowd as well, and also on screens around the square. The pseudos appeared in forms both human and others much, much stranger. She even spotted one that seemed to be a mathematical formula. The crowd applauded and cheered as Melo walked towards them. Many people held their mobiles and tablets up to record the event, and camera drones hovered in the air. Reaching the stage, he waved to the crowd and waited for everyone to fall silent.

“My fellow Curators of September, today is a momentous day. We face a challenge unlike any in our history. A hostile force, the New Commonwealth of Man, is attacking worlds. Nuking them as they go, they’re trying to hide the truth from us. We believe there is about to be a full-scale invasion of September. Nothing like this has happened since the Collapse.

“Our focus always has been and always will be protecting the Net so that every human has access to it, but sometimes that is not enough. We’ve decided that we cannot sit on the sidelines this time and let events happen around us. We must warn everyone in September of what is coming so they can be prepared. We have decided to send out the Three. It’s a rare occasion in our history that this happens, but nothing could be more appropriate given the seriousness of what we face.

“We choose three of our own to go out and speak on behalf of us all, to plead our case and do what they can to make a difference. But this mission is different; there has been nothing like this before. This Three will set out not just to warn, but to make allies and help make sure this threat from outside September is stopped. If they fail, millions will die. If they succeed, they will have changed the course of history. It is a heavy responsibility to put on anyone’s shoulders, but we must do it all the same. Three people were put forward to fulfil this crucial role, and you’ve approved them with your votes. It is time to meet your Three!”

That was their cue. The doors opened, and they walked out in a line. The only noise she could hear was the clicking of mobiles and tablets taking pictures as flashes filled the crowd. The crowd seemed to swirl and move in front of them. At the stage, she moved to the left, with Pablo standing in the middle and Magnus on the right. A pair of people dressed in white stood behind each of them, with baskets in their arms.

“Isidora Jain, Magnus Kimura, and Pablo Khanna: these are your Three,” said Melo.

“Isi.” She tried to suppress a grin. “That’s my name.”

There was laughter and giggles from the crowd. Melo just raised an eyebrow at her.

“Apologies.” He did a mock bow in her direction. “Isidora Jain, who is known as Isi.”

More laughter and cheers came from the crowd.

“These are the Three. They represent the best of us. I can’t think of three people who could do a better job than them. However, they are not the Three yet. First, they must take the oath of the Three.”

He paused to allow the crowd a moment of applause and cheering. He turned around and walked closer to Magnus. He was staring at some fixed point in the distance.

“Do you agree to take on the role of the Three and all the responsibilities that come with it?”

“We do,” they all said in unison.

“Do you agree to do everything possible to fulfil your mission?”

“We do.”

“Do you agree to represent not just yourselves but all of us?”

“We do.”

“Do you agree to work together to overcome any obstacles and to make decisions as one?”

“We do.”

“Then you are ready to be the Three.” Melo faced the crowd again. “They have taken the Oath. Now they can wear the clothes.”

The two people beside each of them stepped forward and began to undress them, removing their tops and trousers. Melo continued to address the crowd.

“We choose three for one reason. It is the smallest number of people you can have a vote with. We cherish our democracy, and so there is no more fitting number than Three.”

Isi now stood wearing just her bra as her trousers were being removed.

“They will work together, but if the situation demands it, they can vote on what to do. This should be an option of last resort, but it is there for them.”

With the trousers gone, the helpers stepped back. She glanced to her side to see Pablo and Magnus in their underwear as well.

“The Three represent us all, and the clothing they wear symbolises this.”

The helpers moved forward again, first putting white sleeves on her arms.

“The white clothes will cover their bodies to hide much of what makes them look individual. It shows that they are putting aside their own needs and desires for the greater good of us all. As the Three, they are performing a task vital for all Curators, not themselves.”

A white tank top and trousers were now placed on her. Pablo and Magnus were being dressed almost identically, but only Magnus had sleeves to cover his tattoos as well. Pablo didn’t seem to have any of his own—at least any that were visible. Then the final part of the outfit was brought out from the baskets, a white mask to cover her face, with gaps for their eyes and mouths. The helpers placed its strap on the back of her head and moved it into place.

“They have taken the oath, and now they wear the clothing. Curators of September, I give you the Three.”

Melo moved off the platform with a bow as they walked to the front. Waves of applause and cheering flooded from the crowds, along with a flickering wave of camera flashes. The Three now stood as pillars of white amongst the colourful crowd. She waved and smiled at them. Pablo and Magnus were doing the same, and she realised no one could see her expression. That would take some getting used to.

After many minutes, the crowd settled down, and they moved up to the microphone to give short speeches of their own. Isi went first.

“Thank you all so much for your support. It’s hard to describe how this feels right now. I fought long and hard for this to happen, but it never crossed my mind that I would be part of the Three. I wish I could promise that we’ll succeed, but so much of what is happening is unknown that it would be a foolish promise to make. What I can say is that I will do every damn thing I can and more. I will not rest until every option has been exhausted. I will give everything I can to save September from what is coming. Thank you all again.”

More cheers and applause came from the crowd as she stepped away and blew kisses at them with a huge grin on her face. She could hear a few bottles of fizz being popped in the crowd. The station looked to be in the mood for a big party, and what better excuse for one? Pablo stepped forward, but she was too focused on the people in the crowd to listen to what he was saying. She scanned the faces for one she recognised until she saw someone waving at her.

It was Lucie, who was trying to push her way to the front. She waved back. Lucie stopped and held up a large, half empty bottle and winked at her. She winked back and sighed. The Three had to go back into the White Elephant once the ceremony was over, so she wouldn’t get a chance to see her or to join in the party. A hand then appeared on Lucie’s shoulder, a rather attractive young woman moved into view, and Lucie put her arm around her waist. Isi smiled to herself; looked like Lucie was doing fine as always.

More loud cheers from the crowd made her look around. Pablo had finished his speech, and she hadn’t processed any of it. Then it was Magnus’s turn to step forward.

“I feel I can only repeat what the others have said,” he began. “It’s a privilege and an honour to be chosen for this role. We will do everything we can to complete this task we have been given, and I can promise we will represent all of you. I would like to say that there isn’t a better group of people in the universe to be a part of. It makes me so happy to be doing this for all of you. Thank you.”

He got the loudest cheers of any of them, though she couldn’t help feeling, with all the bottles being opened, the crowd would have cheered anything at that moment in time. Magnus stepped away from the microphone, and the three of them moved to the back of the podium to allow more pictures to be taken. She looked around for Lucie again but couldn’t make her out in the sea of dancing and celebrating bodies.

“I’m going to miss this crazy lot,” she said.

“Me too,” said Magnus.

“Remember, they’re what we are working to protect. Everything we do is for them,” said Pablo.

“I know. That’s why I agreed to do this.”

“Anyone you going to miss in particular?” asked Magnus.

“Too many to count.” She wrapped her arms around their shoulders and pulled them closer. “Luckily, I think we’ll bring enough crazy with us.”

“Speak for yourself.”

“Oh, don’t worry. I was.” She winked before casting her eye over the crowd again and watching the party. “Come on, we’ve got lots to be getting on with, and I’m sure they’ll be fine on their own.”

Together, they headed back into the White Elephant as the celebrations continued without them.

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